Book 1
Pukeko and Freddy
One night Pukeko and Kea was walking down the
hill home after a big night at a party.
But they didn't know that Freddy was following them. Light after light
as Pukeko was talking to kea he turned around and kea was hanged and kea
swing ford and backward and words were writen on the wall saying you
were next.
Pokeko ran in fear back to the party but when he was running back hot thick blood
running down the road and he got there they where all dead and Freddy was
standing there and behind him writen on the wall was you can run but
you can't hide Freddy smiled with his teeth were sharp as a knife.
as he was running keept on going past Freddy but pokeko came to a stop he turned around
Freddy was standing there then he turned around and his shadow
grow bigger the next morning pokeko was standing there
and whoever goes past him they will die.
hill home after a big night at a party.
But they didn't know that Freddy was following them. Light after light
as Pukeko was talking to kea he turned around and kea was hanged and kea
swing ford and backward and words were writen on the wall saying you
were next.
Pokeko ran in fear back to the party but when he was running back hot thick blood
running down the road and he got there they where all dead and Freddy was
standing there and behind him writen on the wall was you can run but
you can't hide Freddy smiled with his teeth were sharp as a knife.
as he was running keept on going past Freddy but pokeko came to a stop he turned around
Freddy was standing there then he turned around and his shadow
grow bigger the next morning pokeko was standing there
and whoever goes past him they will die.
Hi Karleil,
ReplyDeleteYour blog post is really interesting and has good discriptive words.
Something you should work on is to have more punctuation in your blog post.
Otherwise well done!
From: kavisha