My Birthday
My birthday is coming up and I am turning 11and I wanting to invite people
but I don't know who to invite to my birthday because no one likes me
so I am hoping that some people come to my birthday because
once I no one came to me birthday once and I invited my hole
class and no one came that is just sad so I am hoping that people
will come.
what we are going to do is we are going to the scatepark and
we are going to have lunch at the scatepark then at night time
we are going out for dinner and if you can you maybe staying
over my house so by
but I don't know who to invite to my birthday because no one likes me
so I am hoping that some people come to my birthday because
once I no one came to me birthday once and I invited my hole
class and no one came that is just sad so I am hoping that people
will come.
what we are going to do is we are going to the scatepark and
we are going to have lunch at the scatepark then at night time
we are going out for dinner and if you can you maybe staying
over my house so by
Sup Karleil
ReplyDeleteNice blog.Good punctuation
Something to work on should be to have more detail.
Other wise good Job!
Kia Ora Karleil,
ReplyDeleteI am sure that people will come if you invite them. If you are worried about how people feel about you think about how you are treating other people and how you can collaborate with them and become friends. Your blog post is too short- not even close to being long enough. Describe what you;d like for your birthday perhaps. See you at ELT.
Ms W